Arielle Haughee is a real game changer. As a new novelist, I needed some help with an early draft of my manuscript, to find some of the weak areas and shore them up. After one consultation, Arielle zeroed in on the problems and helped me find a few new ways to solve them. She even helped me with a few follow-up questions, making sure I was on the right track.
-Erik Deckers, Owner of ProBlog Service and author of Branding Yourself
Finished up your draft and now looking for professional feedback on your story? As a frequent contest judge and acquisition editor for my press, I've had the chance to read and evaluate many works. I used my knowledge of common story problems and solution ideas for The Compete Revision Workbook for Writers. I'm also a three-time Royal Palm Literary Award winning author and writing coach at Writer's Atelier Writing Studio, as well as a regular workshop presenter for multiple writing organizations. I will use my expert knowledge and experience to help you with your book!
Story Coaching services include:
Detailed chapter feedback as well as detailed overall book feedback
Notes on the positive aspects of the work
Evaluation of story elements including: character arc, plot, setting, pacing, theme, language, POV, dialogue, and more
Solution ideas for areas of improvement
Opportunity for follow up questions and discussion
Prices are based on word count and estimated amount of time for the project
One time picture book feedback: email for quote
Test run option for first three chapters (email for quote, pending word count)
Coaching sessions on craft or publishing topics: $50 / hour
I have worked with Arielle on several projects, including short stories and a full-length novel. She is a joy to collaborate with. Her feedback is invaluable. It's clear she is pushing no agenda other than trying to make your work better. Her feedback is well organized and easy to follow. I can honestly say I am a better writer for having worked with her and I look forward to using her services again in the future.
-Kristin Durfee, author of the Four Corners Trilogy, published by Black Opal Books
Arielle brings a great grasp of reader immersion. She asks questions about the content and helps you identify loose ends or clarity issues. In her overview of my novel, she was able to flag content I hadn't realized was problematic and could turn away readers. I dive back to her feedback and evaluation often as I continue to polish and prep this novel for agents.
-Valerie Willis, author of the award winning series Cedric, The Demonic Knight